Is this a good resume objective for entry level management job?

Question by Amity!!: Is this a good resume objective for entry level management job?
A managerial position utilizing leadership, planning, and communication skills to influence organizational growth and bottom line profitability.

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Answer by Barbara W
I would suggest two changes: utilizing “my” leadership, planning …
AND to “make a positive influence on” organizational growth and bottom line …

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