Can anyone please help me…cover letter for resume?(too long, but really need help)?
Question by worryrock: Can anyone please help me…cover letter for resume?(too long, but really need help)?
This is a cover letter for my resume. I’m having little problems with English, so please check my grammars and punctuations. I have problem with wording too and constructing a good sentence.
I’m applying as a service crew at fast food chains here in Philippines.
So here it is…..(I’ll just not write my name and address)
I’ll put * on my questions and other things I don’t understand…example, “how old are you?”
My name
My address
My number
My e-mail add
I don’t have any idea about the employer contact information, so I will just not put it.
Dear hiring manager/To whom it may concern “which one is better?”
I’m very much interested to apply as a part time job service crew at Mcdo/KFC/other fast food chains (I will give them my resume)….”Is my first paragraph ok?”
Though, I’m only a high school graduate and having no job experience before, I’m a hardworking, honest, reliable, friendly, responsible person. I am also willing to learn new things and can learn fast.
……”Should I just put less traits and put them in the resume letter”? What should I add in the 2nd paragraph?”
I believe that my skills and personal traits would help your??? ….”no idea”that’s my 3rd paragraph..
In that regard, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications. I can be reached at ………….. or …………… I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much.
“on my 4th paragraph.”what should I add”"about the thank you there, is that ok?”
Sincerely,
Best answer:
Answer by Brybelly
I have re-written your cover letter and made a few of my own suggestions, which appear in parentheses.
To Whom It May Concern,
I’m very interested in applying for a part-time job as a service crew member at McDonalds, KFC, etc. (Basically insert whatever fast food name you are applying for here)
As a high school graduate, I’m hardworking, honest, reliable, friendly and responsible. I am also willing to learn new tasks and am quick to learn. (Don’t point out any flaws, such as lack of previous job training. That will be evident in a resume. Instead, focus on your good characteristics.)
I believe that my skills and personality would be a benefit to your establishment if I were to be hired.
In that regard, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications. I can be reached at ………….. or …………… Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
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I would like to apply as a part time service crew member….Do not abbreviate anything….Tell briefly why you want the job, your qualifications, and an incentive as to why they should hire you. Hardworking and learning fast could be an incentive. State if hired this will be your first job then list your other traits. You say you are a responsible person so tell how you are responsible. Have you been dependable with babysitting jobs maybe? Have you done any volunteer work? Did you maintain good grades in school?
My resume is enclosed for your review, and I am available to meet with you at your convenience for an interview. Then give your contact information. I promise you that a meeting with you will not be a waste of your time.
On an application fill in all the blanks. NEVER EVER note “See resume.”